"Books? I like books!"
Here's the next occasional book progress update:
Introduction
Current Revision: 1
Total Words: 422 (dialogue only)
Chapter 1: Particle-Wave Duality
Current Revision: 5a
Total Words: 5,279
Chapter 2: The Uncertainty Principle
Current Revision: 7
Total Words: 4,499
Chapter 3: The Copenhagen Interpretation
Current Revision: 2
Total Words: 4,801
The Introduction dialogue isn't exactly new-- I wrote it a while back-- but it was part of the stuff that I sent to my agent to get feedback on, so I'll throw it in here.
Chapter 2 has been rather comprehensively revised, and the last couple of sections were completely re-written. Chapter 3 is new, and this revision was actually pretty good-- Kate had only relatively minor edits, and didn't point out any major structural problems. I need to go over it quickly, but I think I'll be pushing on to Chapter 4: The Many-Worlds Interpretation next.
Length may be an issue, as this is already 15,000 words (give or take). There are probably a couple hundred superfluous "really"s in there, though, and another hundred or so "also"s that could be dropped. I'm just not dealing with that at this point, though.
I may be in the market for some technical proofreading in the near future, to check whether I'm saying anything really idiotic by accident. More on that later.
Bonus Out-of-Context Dog Dialogue: "Now, you can argue about who counts as an observer--"
"Not a cat, that's for sure. Cats are dumb."
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At some point in the future, the Free-Ride offspring would like to engage in a dialogue with your dog.
Let it be said that the Spaulding family is also in high anticipation for your book.
So, keep writing already!
Cheers
Pavlov made do with a dog.
Shroedinger required a cat.
Shroedinger was willing to sacrifice his cat for science, but not his dog.
Lawyers can do tech edits. Wait, you have a problem with "whereas," "hereinafter" and "aforementioned?"
Nevermind.
Heh. Referring of course to myself and not to Kate, who undoubtedly has better technical editing skills than me. ;-)
Since bunnies are made of cheese, and (some) cheese has holes, maybe you could write a chapter about how electron "holes" make transistors work.